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Review:Pixileanin says:
This was a very gripping depiction of the phobia and how it deeply affected your character. I had never heard of thanatophobia before this. So thank you for that.

The repetition of your words was a really good choice. I could sense the panic... like a panic attack almost, but deeper, because logically, she knew where it was coming from. To me, that made it even more scary. And having her hide how it affected her physically was a good choice too, showing that she was trying, in her own way, to gain some control over it.

Well done!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Well thank you very much... and I guess you're welcome? :P

I'm so glad that it came across that Roxanne was trying to fight the phobia - in her own way. I was very cautious that it might appear like she was just a victim to the 'monsters'.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Keira :)


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