Hi :) Me again! I thought I would pop back over and read something else of yours. I am so encouraged to keep reading someone's work if they respond to reviews and so on, and you seem to be so grateful that I can't resist! Tbh I am one of those people who thinks that if someone takes the time to review your work, you should respond, right? Otherwise it's just rude. That's my opinion, anyway. So here I am, back to read more. But I'll stop rambling and get to it.
So... Percy and a stripper?! I must admit I was extremely doubtful when I first realised what was going on, but you have somehow pulled it off! I'm sorry if that doesn't sound like a compliment because it definitely is... I love how George and Lee dragged Percy there. Bless. The interaction between Percy and Audrey was the kind that is so unlikely that it becomes totally believable. If that makes sense..?
I did spot a couple of cultural differences... I'm guessing you're from somewhere like America? I might be wrong though! Anyway, it was just things like we say 'University' instead of 'College' and 'honey' isn't such a common term over here, but I am being seriously fussy here. I just pick up on these things because I'm British!
Author's Response: Hello!
Well,well, well! Back for more, huh?! Seriously, this wasn't really the story that I thought you would check out. Firstly, because its Percy and no one really likes that guy but then again...its a stripper-love-story. Hahahah, a favorite reviewer of mine totally requested it and I just had to, it was an idea I couldn't pass up. But the thing with Audrey and Percy actually shows up in "This is Angelina" in the epilogue so that's where alot of people might have come from. I totally know what you mean about people who take a minute to review your work, it makes my day. And plus, I like knowing if someone likes what I'm conjuring, so to speak so don't feel weird! I'll totally be hopping right on over to your own fanfic, and I would have done it sooner but my time was cut short on the computer (I live, basically, at the library. :p)
I totally don't blame you for having doubts, this was a MAJOR stretch for me. Personally, I don't get snobby with any woman that strips, money is money in my opinion and by that, you totally should know that I AM American!
I was really worried if i could pull this story off, its going to be really tough for me but you guys seem to like it. I mean, its already up to like, 47 reads! And I posted it not too long ago! My other story, "Growth" has two chapters but not alot of reads so I was STUNNED.
So I'm doing a good job, yes?
George and Lee would drag YOU to a strip club if they knew you, ahahaha. And its funny picturing Percy there! He was so uncomfortable!
Btw, I'm from down south (Alabama!) and we totally say things like, "Honey" and "Sweetheart" and such.
So you were totally right!
Much love and thanks again!