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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
Hi,
It's InTheShadowsIDwell from the forums here with your review tag review! As someone who is interested in phobias I just couldn't skip over this one, I've actually read a few pieces for phobia challenges but I think what really stood out for me about yours was the fact that it was so different and so dark and almost scary. It really took the phobia and made me almost feel afraid as well, and that's something that really came out so wonderfully with the writing.

I loved your use of descriptions and how you really managed to capture that fear with them, it was like I was right there witnessing the whole thing. I also really like how you explained how the fear came to exist, and the link it has to the past and someone she never knew. This was really beautifully written and I noticed no grammatical/spelling errors which is great! :) I also loved your characterization of these characters, it was just so interesting to see how they all react to Roxanne's fear and how each responded to the situation!

Well done on a really interesting and really well written piece, I really enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Woah - ah that's brilliant! Well.. not that it nearly scared you... but you know what I mean! :P

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love hearing what you think of this story! :)

Keira :)

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