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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!

So far, all of the stories I've read from you have been really great and awesome, and this one doesn't disappoint. I love how you manage to always put all the emotions you need in a one-shot. For this one, 1207 words passed in a blur, but I felt that everything was so complete.

I love your dialogues, I love how they seem fit for Lily and Petunia. I can so imagine them saying the words like that. I love the way you kind of balanced their relationship between, so that Petunia is still mean but much less. So many people portray them as having a very good no-fights relationship when they were a kid and everything bad happens when Lily gets her letter, which obviously in so not true and un-realistic. Yours is believable in many aspects...and I am running out of things to say because it is just so so so perfect! :D

Your perfectness is blinding mee! Welp!

Sheesh, how can you write so much fantastic stuff? :D
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hello again!!
Awww, thank you so much!! I'm not one for writing excessive words :P I like to write things that are short and to the point, but with enough details :D
I'm am so glad that I wrote them right! That's always the thing I am worried about the most! (which is the reason I hardly write dialogue). What siblings don't fight? I'd consider them to be very odd if they didn't! I have always thought that they got on (and didn't) like all other siblings and then Petunia just got jealous and turned it into hatred when Lily got to go discover this whole new world. It always seemed to me like, being the oldest, she was used to having power over Lily, and now she couldn't have that because Lily was special in a way she could never be!
*blush* ..It's not that good...

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