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Review:accioHPFF says:
I really like how this was written, and think that it's an excellent opening chapter!

All of the little things that you wrote into her character- friends with the House-elf; in fact practically everyone, even the Carrows, although not her sister, were fantastic. I think the whole Azkaban care package type thing was something else that I especially liked.

My only problem with this was perhaps just with the wording of some small sections. I found that I had to reread a couple of parts because when I first read it, I wasn't quite sure what you had been meaning. Usually it was probably me trying to read it quickly to find out what was going on, but I just thought that was something. :)

The murder of a HOUSE ELF?! :O I can't wait to read more about that, and you've left me intrigued about what happened! I'll definitely be returning to find out more about that!

An excellent read. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I will go back and check on that. Perhaps I can straighten it out with another re-read. I appreciate the comments!
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