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Review:Cirque Du Freak says:
Wow, this is an incredibly powerful one-shot.

This wasn't poetic or in a dream-like state it was doused in harsh reality - especially by your word choice and how you made each sentence flow with the next one.

You have very hard-hitting descriptions that are unsettling to the reader, but still appropriately chilling - if that makes sense.

I really liked that you didn't choose to name the Death Eater here as it sort of lets the reader infer who it could be and look at the character closely enough - to pay attention to their mannerisms and speech.

I particularly liked your Voldemort - I felt he was very much in character and have no complaints. He was as dark and as menacing as I imagine him to be at that particular time period.

Well done, on a brilliant one-shot!

Cirque xx

Author's Response: It was meant to be just the bare total of this one man's existence. When you're limited by 500 words there isn't much room for embellishments (like I normally like to do). I'm glad you felt compelled to pay closer attention to my character. I myself don't know who I'm writing about, I leave that to you.

I liked writing Voldemort. Is that weird? (Yes) but I'm okay with that.

Thanks!

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