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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought it flowed smoothly and the pace was well balanced. The description was great. It didn't overwhelm your chapter, but gave it a natural boost.

I love, love, love the characters that you have created. I think they are fresh and interesting. They bring another dynamtic to the chapter which is fun to see. I like how you have them characterized to. You don't read a lot about the darker, criminal type characters. I also liked Lily. Oh my gosh is she a great mix between her mother and father. I thought you did a great job bringing that out of her and making her connect with the other characters.

I think the set up is interesting and unique. Like I said I haven't read a lot of stories like this. I like how Lily is threatening to tell and even acts out her fake emotions in front of them. I think this is going to be an intirguing story that takes us on quite the adventure and give us a unique look into the eyes of OC's which I love.

Keep up the great work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: That was fast! Thanks so much for stopping by, i really appreciate it! :D

I'm so glad you like the characters. I happen to adore them, haha. I really love writing Cillian, Elliott, Rocky, and Ashley (who isn't in this chapter but is in the next) because I've never really written criminals like this before. I mean, they're breaking the law, but they aren't like 'bad guys'. They're funny and you know, actually have souls and stuff, haha. And Lily is hilarious to write. I think you're right about her being a good mix between her mom and dad.

I'm really happy that you like the set up and such of the story! It gets a bit more interesting in the next chapter, because we get to see how the wizarding world reacts upon finding out that Lily is 'missing'.

Thank you so, so much!

Erica.


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