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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
HAA, LILY IS SO AWFUL. Blackmailing criminals, that is pretty gutsy. I wonder why she doesn't want to go home. Is she running from something? Why's she hiding? Why one week? I MUST KNOW THE ANSWERS TO THESE QUESTIONS. Something tells me that Lily is somewhat fail and she is on a fail rollercoaster of epic proportions and is going to handle everything marvelously badly. She has some smarts because she knew better than to pay fifteen galleons for polyjuice, but she's got to be a bit daft in some areas to suggest staying with a bunch of black-market thugs she doesn't even know. That or she's just really desperate. WHAT IS GOING ON IN LILY'S LIFE TO MAKE HER DO THIS. WHAT DID SHE DO. Maybe she was bluffing and she never would have gone home and told her father. Because that would mean she would have to go home, and she had said before that she didn't want to go home. So she's got to be in some kind of cray situation, what with the polyjuice-wanting and the maybe-bluffing and blackmailing and crashing with seedy strangers. Or maybe she just lurves drama. She sounds like she might be a little bit insane. I actually really like her. She's vastly different from the usual characterization of Lily Potter. I like Cillian as well. Mmm. That's a good name, Cillian. I want to hear more about these mysterious characters!


Author's Response: LILY IS SO AWFULLY AWESOME YOU MEAN. Pfft, you ask a lot of questions Soroh. Mostly the answers to all of them are "because Lily is an angsty brat of a teenager". Oh my gosh, Lily is so full of fail. Right down to the gobs of glittery black eyeliner (seriously my favorite thing about her). She's capable of being somewhat witty and intelligent, but she is also capable of being a snotty little teenager with the maturity of a kitten with a ball of yarn. I really like her, too. She's hilarious to write. I just give her snarky dialogue and giggle to myself. NOT GONNA LIE ABOUT IT. Ooh, Cillian. He's supasexy in my head (and I mean he is JGL so obvi). I lurve him. I might go cray and write myself into the story so that I can marry him.

I'll post more soon hopefully! You'll have to convince me to do word races or something. (:

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