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Review:BeaJerry says:
Hey! It's BeaJerry from the Review Battle ;3
First of all, can I just say that this may be the best written Dramione I think I've read? The description was brilliant; I can't find a flaw with your talent of description.
And I also enjoyed the fact that you started off without an explanation of why she was there; this chapter was purely her meeting Draco, and them... well.
However, I must say that I can't imagine Hermione in a situation like this, especially a few months after the war. Even if she was drunk at Hogwarts; and not alone; I'd imagine her to be the sort of drunk that would start talking to the walls, not get off with Draco... But I do like how it was a masked ball!
So overall, great opening chapter.
Bea xo

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback :) I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptions and setup!

As for Hermione and her actions... I've found that's the central issue some have with wrapping their heads around this story. I'll be the first to admit she's very OoC in this scene. Her actions with the masked man are essential to the premise of the story though, and I tried to make it as realistic as possible (her being drunk was the most plausible thing I could thing of for Hermione sleeping with someone, haha). I've tried to keep her as in character as possible throughout the rest of the story though to make up for it. :)

Also, the storyline has been altered a bit so it's not right after the war. This would be the beginning of their seventh year if they'd attended it. It's slightly AU ;) Thank you for reading though, and I'm glad you liked it!

Bri xx

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