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Review:javct says:
Review swap!

Interesting. I don't think that I've ever read a story like this before - it's nice to see the Potter children in a different light (I like it!)

I loved the characterisation! It was really good and you wrote this first chapter perfectly. You made firm foundations for all the characters, which is brilliant! We know who's who's and what's going to happen :D

Also, I couldn't pick up any grammatical errors which made me want to do a happy dance! :D

Overall, I really enjoyed and good luck with the rest of your story!
Jas

Author's Response: Thanks so much for swapping with me! (:

This Lily II is definitely different! We'll see even more of that in coming chapters. She's pretty bratty and snarky, which is really fun to write. There's a character who is introduced in the second chapter that she has some really funny interactions with.

I'm glad you enjoyed the characterizations. It took me forever to sort of nail down how I wanted them to be and they've all sort of morphed into how they work best for the story, I think.

Haha I'm pretty good about grammar and spelling. Not perfect, but pretty good. (:

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it!

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