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Review:ericajen says:
OMG ALL THE FEELINGS FOR THIS FIC. I was pretty much cringing the whole time, just waiting for the inevitable ending of sadness. You didn't actually write that part but it's still there, looming over them all ominous and depressing.

I think you wrote this fic really well. It would be nothing without the emotions in it, because without the right tone of emotion in it, it wouldn't be sad to know that James and Lily are about to die. But you wrote the emotions of it very well and it is indeed very sad.

That whole family scene was heart-wrenchingly adorable. I always pictured James to be like that as a dad. He's so cute. And they make such a perfect family, and you captured that about them really well, which makes it all the more heartbreaking that they won't be a family together for much longer. Very, very heartbreaking.

I really enjoyed this. I think you wrote it well and managed to grasp the right emotions that made it so sad but sort of bittersweet in the sense that we got to see those moments of happiness that they had.

Nicely done!

Erica.

Author's Response: Thank you! SORRY ABOUT ALL THE FEELS!
I was going to write their death scene *even the thought of that makes me cringe* but it didn't work.

Thank you! It's how I always imagined them to be as well so I'm glad I'm on the same page as someone :D

Thank you!
Jas


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