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Review:SeverusSnape15 says:
Aww! I have to say, I love happy endings, and I do like this ending. The last line of the story is the PERFECT closer. It's completely wonderful, my dear!

I like the little epilogue that you made. It's very cute! I still wonder the full story of Molly's accident, though. It's not exactly clear WHY she was running across the street, and what they were doing, and I'd really like to know. I wished you'd said something about that that was clearer.

It's interesting how she didn't remember at all, and I like that twist. Usually people's memories come back to them in stories, because that's what the reader wants, but in this case, you did something different, but still gave the reader what they wanted. It was a very different story, and very original, I think.

Your paragraphs could still use some work, but it was better in this one. I think you took the time to just write your heart out with this chapter from the looks of it, but I'm not positive, haha. Well, I hope I was of some help. Feel free to request again/re-request if you make changes. ~Cierra.

Author's Response: Ah, I'm a sucker for happy endings, I'm glad you liked it :D

I didn't really explain her accident and why... I shall have to sort that out as well.

I didn't want Molly to remember everything- I was well aware of my straying into the dangerous cliche territory!

Thanks so much for your reviews, I shall definitely work on what you pointed out, thanks very much xx


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