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Review:MercyWaters says:
Here from the Review Battle, once again. :)

I absolutely love this! It's incredibly realistic, none of the characters seem to be taken out of character. You get the emotion across beautifully and I love the scenes where Draco and Hermione are interacting with one another. They seemed so sweet with one another and the romantic aspect was written excellently. The flashbacks flowed well and didn't seem forced. They're nice and informative and give the sense of sadness and nostalgia Hermione surely must be feeling at the time of her wedding. I also liked the small little interaction she had with her father before walking down the aisle--it seemed real, not forced.

I only noticed one little typo. In the fourth paragraph you said "father lead daughter out from the doorway". I'm assuming this in the past tense, and if so, should be "father LED daughter". Other than that I didn't notice anything glaring when it came to grammar and spelling.

Once again, I cannot emphasize how much I enjoyed reading this. :) You're an excellent writer, and a wonderful Dramione writer. I'm most definitely going to go check out the sequel!

Bri xx

Author's Response: I am rather fond of this one-shot and so I am very happy that you enjoyed this! It's like having someone visit my house and enjoy their tea and the atmosphere, that's basically the same feeling.

Gah! I can't believe you found a typo! Do you know how many times I've gone over this story, how I've had it beta'd (I don't get beta'ing) and still you found that typo! I salute you!

Thank you for reading!

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