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Review:Patti says:
HELL YEY!!! I like your style XD

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Ladies and gentlemens this is how you write a one-shot!

so much going on in my head right now! she is pregnant?!! OMG!!!


Just one question the war in your story happens in what year? in the books is 1998, one year after Draco's sixth year at hogwarts.
If Ashley is already a healer the war had to happen at least over a year after they left school, right, I don't know? please tell me

Author's Response: I'm very impressed with your knowledge of the story's timeline! I wasn't writing it alongside of J.K.'s story. This is sort of set a few years after they graduate. It always made a more sense to me for them to have gotten some secondary education first, when they were still sort of learning and then have a war begin when they were starting to build families-at their most vulnerable. Why not start a war when our beloved characters are starting to get married and create families? Why not wage war when you could have potentially more "Harrys" with no parents out there?
I understand why J.K. made it during school though, it flowed better and was a spectacular ending. The story would be rather choppy if all of a sudden they graduated, became Aurors, and THEN fought a war. At least it would if it were in her book. My novel that is the backdrop of this story has a few chapters of validation and it'll explain the timeline as I go. Very good catch though! :)


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