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Review:Erised says:
Another brilliant chapter! I thought that the different perspective was unusual and brought an extra dimension to what otherwise would just be Peony's point of view. It's also good that Peony is finally cottoning on to what's going on around the school, even if she is so perfect and innocent ;)

I feel as if you've really started to go deeper with this so that it's not just a parody of a Mary Sue - there are the deeper issues of the second wizarding war and tensions also coming in to play, which is great to see, so well done for still being original and providing depth to a Mary Sue!

I really hope you keep writing this and I can't wait for more chapters!

Author's Response: Another great review! Wow, thanks!

Is it possible to have a Mary Sue and still have a story worth telling? I dunno, but I'm going to try.

Peony might be perfect, but she's not perfectly innocent. She has full awareness of some things, but maybe she doesn't pay attention to everything she should. Uh oh! If she has depth, does that still make her a Mary Sue? *is wondering*

I have eight chapters planned for this, which is... really appalling. But I'm stubbornly going to finish it one way or the other. So glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for your great review!

*sends chocolate*

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