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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Ahh the classic Hogsmeade date. Gabby is definetely quite the Mary Sue if I may say so. In the course of my field research, I've realised that Mary Sue's tend to have different characteristics depending on which era they are in. Maurader Sues are usually either a nice quiet girl that convinves sirius to stop being a playboy or a "fifth marauder" prankster. Hogwarts era Sues tend to have improbable connections to canon characters, often sirius' daughter or harry's twin sister. And as for next-gen, its always the quirky and saracastic girl that somehow has all the popular guys interested in her. And you have nailed that absolutely perfectly here.

Also, I have to give you credit for the fact that despite all the cliches you've intentionally included, this can actually still stand up as a legitimate story, and its definetely a fun and enjoyable read.

Thanks for entering the challenge!

Author's Response: Gabby is definitely a Mary Sue. She doesn't have any flaws that I can think of, except that she is in love with Albus who in this story doesn't seem to really have all that many charms at all. AT LEAST KALE WAS ENTERTAINING, GABBY. Albus just has emerald orbs (I think that comes into play a lot in the next/final chapter which I will be posting as soon as I finish typing this response). And yeah, those are definitely fairly accurate observations about the different Mary Sues of every era. And you know, some people can totally pull off writing characters with those personalities. But sometimes they're just total Gabbys.

Thanks! I'm glad you think so! I actually did enjoy writing this story. Which I did reallyyy quickly, so hopefully there aren't too many errors.

I'll be posting the final chapter now! Don't know if you'll get around to reading it before you judge the winners, but it's full of typical happy ending gooey goodness.

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