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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Finally here to review your challenge entry!

So right off the bat I have to say that this story pretty much resembles the majority of next-gen stories I've read, and of course it features the ultimate next gen hallmark; the "witty and sarcastic" OC.

You presented the typical OC's conundrum excellently, poor Gabby, it's such a disaster that a popular and athletic guy is getting in the way of her ineviatble romance with a canon character. Also, I love how every guy seems to be a quidditch captain, so typical. And how they haven't been to clas yet, but they have a Hogsmeade weekend already, another great cliche.

Looks good so far, thanks for entering the challenge!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Oh yes. Gabby is very witty. There is so much wit in her body that she actually doesn't blood because there is no room for it. Just wit. Jury's still out on why she's alive still.

LOL YES. GABBY'S LIFE IS SO SAD OMG. And she's all woe is me, Albus doesn't love me so I better go out with the Ravenclaw quidditch captain instead. And yes, the qudditch captain rivalry is obviously very important. And yeah, Hogsmeade weekends happen when I want them to happen. Not when it's logical. And classes? WHO NEEDS THOSE?

Thanks for reviewing!

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