|Review:||EverMalfoy(aka EverDiggory) says:|
Wow, I've never read, or obviously written--well, I have a word document open to start as soon as i'm done with this review;D-- a James/Lily, but I love this! I think your characterization was absolutely...I don't want to simply say wonderful, it was much more then that. James wads so wonderful, and even when we weren't...inside Lily's head--if that makes any sense?-- her body language was enough to characterize her, for a first chapter at least.
I think the detail you put into this was the perfect amount--enough for the perfect imagery, but not enough to make me jab my eye balls out 'cause nothing interesting was happening! Bravo!
I think this...the situation, I suppose you could say, was unique. I think how he went to get her a sandwich just to see her smile was adorable! And now that song is in my head;P it's a good song, I'm sure you've heard it!
I really wasn't expecting this, it was such a lovely surprise! I was expecting some fluffy baby moment thing, but I'm also guilty of having not read the summary.
James was homesick...adorable! I think the little things you added like that, was simply wonderful. It was a bit of insight...that wasn't unbearably long and drug out, but it was enough to give us enough to interest us, and really add to the story and the characterization.
There very minimal errors, for which I was thankful;P
I don't know what it is about your style of writing, but I really, really love it!
I think you're a talented writer; this really, really captured me, it was truly fantastic:D I think it was absolutely adorable, and entertaining!
Please keep writing, I'll be adding you to my list of favorite authors.
The moment I log in.
But right now, I'm too lazy.
But siriusly;D Please, please, please keep doing little cute things like this! You're truly very gifted, and I want to see you make the most of that! I'm sure you won't let this talent go to waste, and I surely don't say that to everyone! You're the second person I've said that to! You're really a brilliant writer!
Author's Response: Well, congratulations! you're the first reviewer "Ever" to make me tear up from a review! (as a good thing of course lol)
jeez, I'm still tearing up... Maybe it's because it's late, or maybe it's 'cause you're the sweetest reviewer "Ever" (lol I like doing that :P)
I'm just in shock of this review. If there was any doubt of sleeping well tonight, there isn't anymore!
You'll definitely get a mention in my Blog Random Reviewers lol :)
I know putting in details really makes a story, but the readers who catch them are the ones who gather the full meaning of the story, and THAT makes it great.
Thanks again sooo much, truly.
xoxoxox :) Owlpost68