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Review:EverMalfoy(EverDiggory) says:
Hey doll, sorry for not logging in, I was too lazy!

First off, I love these kind of stories!

From what we've read of these characters, I think you have them pretty canon. Well.about as much canon is it could be for such a situation. If that makes any sense? I love that Ron was still...well, Ron, and Hermione was very realizing and whatnot of her mistake.

I didn't see too many errors, so it really wasn't all that distracting.

I really want to know more about Luke, how he had Hermione so wrapped around his fingers, and whatnot. I also want to know why he saw it fit to leave her.

I like how you explained some things that others find too pesky, so they just leave it out, such as Dumbeldore taking care of the appointments and whatnot, her getting...I don't want to say fat;P but bigger because she's pregnant? Haha, sorry that awkwardness of explaining.

The only thing that really made me do a double take was how Draco let her off the hook so easy. But--now, I might be wrong--I think this said it was a draco/hermione? Is he going soft?;D I don't know, I'm sure it will be revealed as you update--which I hope you do very,very,very,very,very soon,

I really love this, if you can't tell with all those very's.

Please,please update! Thanks for the awesome read!

xoxo

Ever

Author's Response: Well i'm glad that you liked the chapter and thank you so much for the comments on characterization. I know Hermione is slightly ooc but I'm glad that you think for the most part she is in character. I do still hope to update though some of my other stories have taken a priority! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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