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Review:Aphoride says:
Wow. This was incredibly powerful - even more amazing considering how short it is (by the way, congratulations on getting the word count!).

I loved how even though it was in first person, you never revealed who it was. You don't need to, either - it could be anyone, really. Regulus, Draco, Lucius... the ambiguity really works. I also liked how you started with talking about events, rather than jumping straight into it, it made it seem so calm and almost serene, before you moved down on into Voldemort and the Mark. Ah, that was so good! Voldemort was pretty much spot on, with the not-really-a-question thing and the laugh. The last line was just perfect.

I really, really enjoyed this. It was the perfect length, pace - everything.
Aph xx

Author's Response: I was surprised by the premise that came to mind when I decided to write this. I wanted to keep him anonymous for some reason. I didn't really want a name to the character. You get a taste of him just through his fears and what happens to him.

I enjoyed writing Voldemort for some reason...

Thanks!


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