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Review:charlottetrips says:
This is interesting. It isn't a type of story or plot I've seen around here. Most NextGens focus on some type of love story of one of the numerous children, especially with Rose and Scorpius, who apparently is the fanon idea of a canon pairing.

It's quite a morbid story to start out with, a teen being sick and almost dying in the first chapter. Plus the whole graphic scene and the description of the disease. I would see if there was a way to format the chapter so that the newspaper article stood out as such but otherwise, it was pretty official. Though panicked.

Cho Chang also seemed to lose it a little but I understand in the aftermath of having one of the children in a coma and about to die and the rest at risk.

Rose having bruises...dun dun dun.

As an aside, I like that you've made one of the Weasley-Potters a Hufflepuff! :)

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I have not worked on this story in a very long time but it's still nice to get some feedback! I'm glad you found it interesting and unique.

And haha, I think you may have read the names wrong! None of the Weasley-Potters are in Hufflepuff. James is in Gryffindor, Albus is in Slytherin and Lily is in Ravenclaw. I think you may be thinking of Lucy (Percy's daughter). :)

Thanks once again! The review is much appreciated!

Bri xx


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