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“Your father’s such a lovely man,” he comments, rolling his eyes.


“He’s not all bad,” I reply, still thinking of his words at the Ministry.


“What do I have to do to gain his approval?” Scorpius asks, a hint of frustration in his voice. “Change my surname? Disown the family?”


“It’s nothing personal.”


“Nothing personal?” he repeats incredulously.


“Well, yeah, he’d be the same with any guy who wanted to go out with me.”


“How do you know that?”


“Coz I asked him what his problem with you was, why he seems so intent on mistrusting you, and he said he can’t trust anyone else to protect me.”


“Deep words from Ron Weasley.”


“I know, I was…surprised.”


“Perhaps I should find your dad and express my willingness to jump in front of an Avada Kedavra for you.”


“Don’t you dare ever do that. Jump in front of a curse for me.”


“Why not?”


“Because I couldn’t live without you. Damn Dad, he got me all sentimental.”


“I’m touched, Rose.” He places a hand over his chest. “Your grudging sentimentality warms my bitterly cold, black Malfoy heart.”






That is my absolute favourite bit :) nice idea with the patronuses too!

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