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Review:Maelody says:
I loved this chapter! It was sweet and the family was really fun! :D I love her parents and all the conversations they shared. Dylan reminds me of Percy, and I sort of want to glare at Cleo! xD I can't believe it is going to end though :(. I won't lie, I thought that her being sick in the beginning was a result to her being pregnant, lol. As for the epilogue, I think it would be neat if it were like, five years down the road and Louis asks her to marry him. The answer would be up to you, but of course I would love it if it were yes. :) I can't wait until the next chapter, though! :D This story is so sweet and I love it!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Her family are some of my favourite characters, they remind me a bit of my own family with the banter haha.
And I have to admit, there was a lot of Percy influence in Dylan's character, and Cleo is based on a person I know in my own life! (so satisfying to know you want to glare at her!)

Ahh, pregnancy... yeah, Bea is enough of a screw-up without THAT cliche, haha! But may have been nice and dramatic to write!

Thanks for the epilogue ideas, it's been really helpful! And yeah, I have to admit, I don't like giving spoilers, but seriously, I'm too much of a happy ending lover to ruin their romance.

Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, thanks for reviewing!

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