Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Flavia says:
Oh my goodness this chapter was adorable!!! I just loved it...so sweet! That moment between Hannah and Neville was so perfect and just made me go "naw". I liked the way Nevile was watching her as well and wishing that he was the one making her laugh...very cute.
I really love your characterisation of Hannah, whilst she still fits with the person we see in canon, you've developed her into this girl who's actually quite funny, interesting, clever and quietly confident. Her attitude works really well with her being a Hufflepuff, she has bravery but it's not her dominating feature, the thing that stands out is her smile and her kindness, which is just perfect.
Just one little thing, the end of the last sentence has a grammatical error that bugged me. It should just be "if Seamus hadn't snored" the 'of' shouldn't be there.
But absolutely adorable chapter, I can't wait to read the next one :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 527
Submit Report: