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Review:Owlpost68 says:
wow, so Gideon's her father... I wonder who the mother is... Really great job!! I think that last sentence could be worded differently 'cause it doesn't really make sense. maybe mourning for the parent she didn't lose but would never find?

Poor Pheobe, the only family she's known not wanting her back...
Anyway, great job!

Author's Response: The last sentence.it will make sense nearer the end as to why I worded it, if I forget about it I will end up changing it, though I hope I don't. Gideon had to be the father, I wanted someone people wouldn't expect then maybe it would add a bit more drama to it. I do feel sorry for Phoebe a lot more as she's got a lot to deal with at such a young age, a bit like Dumbledore.

Thank you for all these reviews and I will try to update asap!

Bex


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