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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is an excellent next chapter to the story!

I love the way that you have gradually introduced her friends and tried to revert away from her little problem for the time being and this makes the whole storyline a lot less overpowering than say it would be if the main focus of every chapter was about her pregnancy.

I've decided I quite like Diana and I think she is actually going to a very good support for Dominique once they find out about her pregnancy.

I also like the part where you made Diana talk about who was going to be in each house and I especially like the fact that you didn't make them all be in Gryffindor as that is one of my pet peeves. I think that Louis is going to also be an amazing little brother!

Author's Response: Awww thankyou, you dont know how worried I was about this chapter. Thats one of the reasons I delayed it soo much, it could have gone 2 ways and I couldnt pick which one.

Glad you Like Di, the problem is trying to make sure she doesnt end up Mary-Sueish xD

Ahahah glad you liked that very random part of the story. And yeah I have always seen each Next Gen character in a mix of houses (Dominique I usually see in Claw but I put her in Gryff xD)

Thankyou :D
Glad to know this chapter wasn't a complete and utter fail! x


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