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Review:JessiesGirl says:
Hey, it's JessiesGirl here from the forums with your review.

I don't think I've ever cried this much whilst reading something, at least not in a very long time anyway. This was such a beautifully composed piece with such a heartbreaking storyline. I particularly admire your use of emotive language here; it's quite clear you've taken out a lot of time to connect the audience to Ginny's agony and distress.

Had this been written from any other character's point of view I'd argue that psycologically not all the ingredients for death and loss are there but taking into account how strong Ginny is I couldn't imagine this being written in any other way. I also like how you don't just focus on that particular moment, you reflect over Lily's entire life and enable us to sympathise with her mother.

There were a few choppy bits here and there but over all your style of writing is quite beautiful. Perhaps investing in a beta would be a good idea though; I did happen to notice a few grammatical errors - nothing too distracting however.

Overall I really enjoyed reading this. It was a very moving piece with a very inspiring ending. Well done!

x - JessiesGirl - x

Author's Response: Hey thank you for the review.

I'mglad you liked it but sorry that you cried! I'm so happy you thought it was beautifully composed and had a heartbreaking story line. I love Ginny but when a plunny strikes I knew I had to write this story.

I tried to make it not too overly emotional but at the same time I wanted people to see that Ginny was breaking down over it and that she wasn't able to cope with the death of her daughter. Especially with reflecting over Lily's life and then seeing it come to such a sudden end.

I do have a beta (well she's getting to this) so hopefully the grammar and all else will soon be sorted

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