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Review:EmilySvart says:
It was really annoying in a way, but of course, that is what Mary Sue stories always are, and considering that it was a challenge, you did wonderful.
One thing that confused me a bit was the flow of the time. If your plan to was to make it like it usually is in bad fanfics, then towards the end, it was good, but at the beginning, everything went by too fast. What I have noticed reading all kinds of bad fanfics is that the time goes fast and slow, in a manner of 50 pages of dialogue and descriptions that happened in a split second and then jumping to ten years later in the story. Uh.. I hope I managed to make it understandable. ^^
But all in all, it was quite good and I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I took your thoughts to heart and adjusted the time issues. Hopefully, this will make it a smoother read.

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