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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Ahha, so I'm back and this was the first thing I pounced on and uh... wow! That was so unexpected, you are an amazing writer and can cover so many different issues, it's incredible. That was so good, you capture her so well (nothing like I imagined) and it works so well. Poor Perce, he seems a bit overwhelmed and George and Lee were so funny! Good to see George again. This picks up really well from This Is Angelina and I'm curious to know how you get to the conversation Percy had with George and Angelina about Audrey. Their interaction is great and I cannot wait for more!

GirlOnThesSidelines.

P.S. there is a chapter in validation for Paradox and I've got several more lined up.

Author's Response: Hello!

I wrote this all for you, you know! (Cries into handkerchief) I'm so relieved that you like this, I was really worried that I had done a bad job on it. At first, I sat there typing it and went, "Now, I know I've messed up." And then I got a rejection letter too after I posted it for the first time and I was like, "ARGH! Its too raunchy!!" but you guys have made me feel LOADS better. Phew! :D
Thank you for the compliment, I think my writing is okay at best but you guys are just too nice to me! It makes me blush!
But there are so many issues going on with Audrey and Percy alike so I wanted to give just a hint of what I'd torture them with later and I wanted my main girl to be likeable at least. Sure, she's a bit crude and looks like a twelve-year-old but she's sweet underneath it all, I think. Hahaha.
Perce's poor reaction to her was hilarious to write because I'm sure he was blushing for days afterward. He got snogged! Against his will! Mwhahahaha.
It was Lee's idea to take them to the club and it was so good to write him again! Georgie too, I missed him alot! I'll keep up with the posts then, I thought I would go back and forth with this one, perhaps show from both POV's to give you guys a greater scope of the story...hm. That might actually be a good idea, it would help me too.as I'm so lazy.hahahha.
Oooh, How dare you tease me with Paradox! That's the chapter I'm dying for! I'll be salivating over it as soon as it gets validated! You can count on that and Oh! Our dear Georgie got his own fanfic...just his own and I couldn't resist, its called, "Memories" on my site and should be up in a few days. Its more of a prequel I guess to "This is Angelina" about a time when their friendship almost ended. Gasp! Can't wait for your opinion on it, it was just a spur of the moment thing.
Much love and thanks for two awesome reviews!
Gabbie


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