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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Nice first chapter.

It introduces us to the characters and really sets the scene as they're obviously on their first day back in the second year so we can only imagine what's going to happen within this story!

I can see that you are going to have a very solid characterisation for Rora and I hope that she becomes a very prominant OC and I can actually believe she was part of the marauders. So far I think you're doing a good job of making her seem very integrated with the crowd and as she's friends with Lily then you know this will be quite a good plot line!

I love how you also haven't forgotten Peter!" That shows real skill as I have seen so many marauder stories where he has simply just been cut out! And I also liked the way you reminded us that not everything was safe with the article from the newspaper!

A good first chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you've found it to be a solid first chapter. It's really important for me to have believable characters so the fact that you found them so is encouraging :)

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