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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is a nice little piece.

I really do like the characterisation of Rory and think he seems like a very strong character only enhanced by the fact that although he is underage he is brave and wants to stay and fight. That shows that the sorting hat was right to put him in Gryffindor as he's not going to role over and let the battle be fought by others when he can help.

The only thing that I really noticed was that some of the paragraphs were a little bit too long and blocky which made it difficult to read in places but obviously that is only a little thing which is more of a personal preference.

I really liked the way you also gave us an insight into his life and how his mum died. This makes us realise just that he had a lot going on at home but he still believed in making the world safe very strongly.

I liked this piece

Author's Response: Wow thank you for this awesome review. When I was given this challenge to do, for some reason the idea on how to portray this character just popped into my head.
It was really the first time I'd tried to write a story from an OC's pov, and I'm glad it worked out nicely.
Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. If you read anymore of my stories I hope you enjoy them with equal enjoyment.

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