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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
First of all I must say that I really liked your description in this! You started off very strong with it and continued it throughout the chapter as well and it was wonderful I felt. It was such a sad story as I continued on learning of her life and what she had widdled down to as she watched her sister and brother both with their own families and she had none. I really felt this was a beautiful oneshot and was very well written. I think this bit "It their secret, their home" is supposed to have a was in between it and their. But that was the only mistake I spotted! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much, oh I deleted that when I was changing the tenses. I'm so forgetful :L. I'm so glad you liked it!:D

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