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Review:Erised says:
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This was a lovely and cute one-shot and I loved how it was from Lily's perspective because she is one of my favourite next gen characters! I also loved the sad little twist at the end which sets this story apart. It wasn't a typical love story which is great!

I almost wanted this to be longer so that we could see more of a character development from Lysander and Lily; it sounds strange but I think this could easily become a short story!

Great story :)

Author's Response: Hey thank you for the review.

I love Lily too! I write quite a bit about her although granted not when she is particularly old but still I really do love her/ I don't like the whole idea about typical love stories and really try to stray away from the cliches associated with unrequited love ect.

I think it could have become a short story too but I really did like it as a one shot because it just showed Lily and Lysander and honestly if I'd have messed with it I seriously think that I may have ruined it.


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