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Review:javct says:
javct45 back with another review!

I really liked this :) Your story defiantly has to be one of my favourite marauders stories that i've read to date :D

Your characterisation is brilliant! I'm intrigued by Professor Grimstone's side story, I hope we get to see more of it in the chapters to come - I like how you've kept the job jinxed as well :)

I love the originality of this story. It's not like the usual Sirus/OC where they would rather die than talk to one another, it's nice to see Sirus and Keira talking :)

There were no grammatical errors, spelling mistakes or anything else either so that was good!

Jas

Author's Response: HOORAY! You're back! *dances* I'm so happy you like it. I was really worried about this chapter, I wrote the beginning really quickly then ran out of motivation so it sat on my computer for over a week before I did anything else with it. I was worried that because of the long gap, that it wouldn't flow right.

Ah, Professor Grimstone is an interesting character and hopefully you'll all like his story as I slowly give you all tidbits. :P It's nothing for the overall plot, but it's a lovely side plot that hopefully you'll all enjoy.

I hate those stories, where they are either secretly passionately in love, or they refuse to talk to one another until suddenly they start making out in the Common Room. Of course, in seventh chapter.

No, I am determined to make mine different, and hopefully you'll find it different and enjoyable as well ^_^

Thanks so much for the review, and i'll try and get the next chapter up soon!
- Adele :)

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