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Review:Bluestreakspirit says:
Warning: I'm gonna be blunt and a bit harsh here. I don't mean to be rude; I just want to give constructive criticism! Hate me all you need to, or just don't read. Here goes:

I really like the summary on the little chapter synopsis/banner thing, but so far I don't like the actual chapters as much. They're super short (2,000 words a piece would be a much better jumping-off point in my opinion). There hasn't really been that much of a plot development so far. No conflict, rising action, etc. The dialogue and thoughts of Ashley & co. seem random and, at times, sort of pointless. Like Hermie in the greenhouses. I just wish that the plot would come out! Oh, and the spacing is really weird, but I'm not sure if/how you can fix that.

The characters (even as slightly developed as they may be) are cool and I looove the banner/chapter images. The summary of the story seems really fantastic!

I hope to don't hate me :( I think this has super wonderful potential! Can't wait for next chapter.
Cat

Author's Response: Why in the world would I hate you?:) I know the chapters are short... I just trype them quickly so there's something to read... and with the spacing I am lost with that. It's annoying I don't want it that way but I cant fix it:| Oh! and with the whole story in general i'll try to make it more.. interesting?:)
Thank you:)))

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