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Review:Sarahthebookworm says:
Hi there!
Sorry for not reviewing before; I just realized that after reading and enjoying your story; I could at least do you the courtesy of leaving a review showing my appreciation.

Anyway, I loved this chapter; I liked how you put Spencer in this situation; it is definitely very realistic and makes the story more real for the readers knowing that things can - and will - go wrong for the heroine. We can relate to her more then. I like how James is really understanding about the whole thing. I love how hyper Spencer becomes after taking the Midol! Her thoughts are just hilarious. I love Spencer as a character in general; she's so sarcastic and cute.

I enjoyed the whole date thing, it was both awkward and funny. I laughed at how snobby Gustave was; it made the restaurant seem even more ridiculous. And I like how the Potter family has still kept in touch with the Dursleys. And it was cute; him explaining blood status without even telling her what Muggles and non-Muggles are.

And they finally kissed! You know, when I read th first few chapters, it seemed like they would have reached that point in, like,the third chapter. And now you've made us wait thirteen chapters! All I can say is, finally!

Great chapter! I'm off to read the next.

Sarah

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're liking it! This chapter was a lot of fun to write; it seems that the more ridiculous it is, the more fun. I'm really glad that you like Spencer and James and the date! I for some reason enjoy putting Spencer in embarrassing situations and making things real awkward for her. But yeah, James is a pretty easy-going guy so all works out :)
I read on JK's website that Dudley and Harry exchange things like Christmas cards and have occasional visits as adults, and I feel like that's rarely touched upon in fanfics. So yeah, I wanted to include that, plus I thought that James would probably seek advice from a Muggle.
And yay! This kissed! FINALLY! I dragged it out, I know, but it was worth it, right? :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D


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