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Review:WeepingWillows says:
First off I just love your original character's name 'Aurora' reminds me of Sleeping Beauty which is one of my fairytales. I loved how everyone was teasing Lily and James and Sirius' comment about how they're soulmates.

Poor Rora, I felt bad for when they were teasing her about her moaning in her sleep. :/ Even though it's such a typical thing for a group of teenagers to tease someone about.

I loved the Gryffindor Welcome Back Bonfire idea! :) I also like Rora's and Sirius' interaction at the end.

Great plot so far! Grammar and descriptions is great and I'm enjoying this :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you spotted that, that's where I got her name from! I thought it was beautiful and unique and very "wizard-y" sounding if that makes sense?
And yes, I try to include teasing/embarrassment because I feel like at times a lot of people neglect that side of teenager life in fics. Even between friends, it happens!

Thank you so so much for the feedback, it means a lot :)

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