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Review:WeepingWillows says:
Hi! So this is WeepingWillows here with your review. I just wanted to say that so far you got a great start! The plot flow seems steady and I do enjoy that you went in depth about the characters and also your original character which really helped give the reader some history about the character.

Grammar wise I did catch one thing but other then this your descriptions were perfect!

“I can’t believe it’s our last year,["] I whisper, still lost in the past.

Just one little error. Good story so far!

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you're liking it so far!! My main concern is having the characters and story be believable and interesting enough to want to follow so hopefully you find that holds true :)
And I'm glad you liked the character-background. I was struggling with how much to put in, because I didn't want to overload the reader with too much info at once.
And thanks for the grammar tip! Don't be afraid to point those out, I always appreciate them haha!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!:)

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