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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really enjoyed this chapter! I was a bit freaked out that the zombies would multiply that ridiculously fast, but hey there zombies and they can do what they want.

I was on edge reading this chapter. I felt awful for Lily, Albus and James. But I am glad that James missed out on the casualties that occured at his own home and that he is so far okay.

I think you did a great job bringing each character to life and making the reader feel their panic. The flow and pace of the story were well balanced. Like I said I was on edge while reading. It's one of those nail biters where you just don't know what's going to happen, but you love the story so much you just have to keep reading to find out.

I really like your description and snippets of details here and there for the overall piece and for their characters mannerisms. I thought it brought them out that much more along with the angst of the story.

I will say that my heart litterally plummeted into my stomach when Hermione says "Hello, Greyback." I just get this creepy hair-standing-on-end feeling with him.

I love Zombies! This is why you should never mess with magic!

Keep up the great work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Hey!

I know, the zombies really are reproducing ridiculously fast, but there is definitely a reason that it is happening, so definitely stay tuned for that one :)

I'm so happy you thought this chapter was balanced, because I really thought this one was the worst one so far. I really am self concious about my action scenes, especially this one so I am glad that it came across ok. It definitely is a nail biter and I know myself because when I was writing it I coudld definitely feel the tension!! haha

I'm glad that you liket he descriptions and the details. That's one of the things that I pride myself on which is why I almost always second guess myself when it comes to action scenes because it is harder to put in. so thanks.

As for Greyback, I will say that i have already started writing that chapter and I am having a great time doing so!

thanks so much for the kind review, I really appreciate you taking the time out of your day to come read my story!

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