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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!
So sorry for taking such a long time to get the review across!

Hahaha, at the start I was thinking 'Hmm...why is this story so familiar? And at the end when I read the author's note, I was like 'Oh yeahh! I beta-ed this story!' I have a memory of a goldfish for everything...ugh. You would hate to be me. :P

Anyway, as I said to you before I love this story and reading it again brought me to the verge of tears. I really like the way you characterised Remus and you were really spot-on with his thoughts and emotions!

I do think that the story is fast-paced in terms of transitions (ie. from the night Remus cried to the morning) so I guess you could work on that, but overall I think the whole thing flows very well and you wrote it really neatly!

Woohoo! Remus ftw,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Haha, niceee.

I'm glad you think I had Remus' emotions spot on, that means a lot.

And I understand what you mean, it being fast-paced, and I could work on that.

Thank you so much for your thoughts(:

~Sarah
Xxx


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