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Review:Siriusly3 says:
Oh, Dumbledore's office? What? Guess I'll find out why in the next chapter;). I liked Hermione a whole lot more in this chapter, when she went through the proposal in her head I realised it was a bit insensitive. Even if I don't want to believe it because I love Ron so much *sigh*. Haha, as always your writing was beautiful and all the sentences were flowish. I like the contrast of long and short sentences, especially at the end of chapters. The Bathila Bagshot thing was a nice twist, I like how Hermione gets to look through her things when she has so much history with her. :D

Author's Response: Haha Dumbledore's office indeed! I'm glad you liked her more. I am trying to keep her as much to canon as possible but as every fanfiction writer knows she is extremely hard to keep in canon!

Ron isn't the bad guy in this, just a little insensitive maybe but definitely not bad!I'm glad you like the way my writing is flowish and I mix the sentences around. This was really my little 'experiment' so I like that it works.

I used Bathilda Bagshot to try and get rid of some of the cliches associated with time travel so I'm glad you liked the twist :)

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