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Review:Siriusly3 says:
Oo er. Someone's moody! :D I really liked the first bit of this chapter, it was so descriptive and lovely, and Ron and Hermione were being so cute and in love! But then something snapped and she hated him? I don't really understand why, because he didn't make her breakfast. That is quite selfish of him but I think she would've told him so, not suddenly start hating him. Then again, the goatee and the egg in his mouth made me want to throw up :S. Also, I thought the idea that they all have tattoos is really sweet. :D This is really good writing and it flows well, I liked the way you ended it, with Ron calling after her :)

Author's Response: Hey :)

Hermione is a little bit moody in this because it's their first day off in a very long time together and she had expected him to behave a little more gentlemanly by at least offering her breakfast ect. And they are cute and in love but Hermione is seriously considering their relationship especially after the botched proposal.

I'm glad you like the description in this and think that the writing flows well!

Thank you for the review


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