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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey here I am with your review from review tag!

I love this piece! It shows the love Lily and James had from each other by him remembering that that song was 'their' song. And it also showed the bittersweet moment that Harry was with his mother and father and when James said Harry not showing him the love you realise that well they won't be there any longer after that evening.

It's interesting that Lily is skeptical about the marauders and her friends coming to their ouse because obviously theyre very scared about being found by Voldermort. And I LOVE the way you remembered to mention Peter. That really showed your skill as a writer to me.

The end really tugged on the heart strings because it reminded us that they were going to die that day!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I just always think that Lily would be so stressed out and worried about Harry that she would become cautious of everyone (beside her family of course)

Of course I remembered Peter! He may have been a snivelling rat that betrayed his best friends but he was still a Marauder whether people like it or not. Thank you!!!

Jas


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