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Review:Maelody says:
Sorry for the late review, but I just finished everyone's stories. :) Anyway, this was beautifully written. The feelings Snape feels and how you wrote his dying scene was absolutely brilliant. Somehow, I was able to see colors swim around with each scene I read. Though, I do wish that it was longer. A topic as important as this could have had a lot more explanation in it, because I wasn't able to officially get into the way Lily changed her mind. I really like the idea of Snape and Lily, but only when she chooses James in the end. I have read a few believable Lily/Snape stories though, and this one really would have had me, but I really think it could have expanded more. Either way, the story is beautiful, and I love what you have in it. :) 9/10!

Author's Response: Hey, no worries! Sorry about the late response. School is a soul-sucker. I always get all flustered when people call my work beautiful, but thank you. That means a lot to me that you think so. His dying scene was my absolute favorite to write - it's actually what started this entire story, so I'm pleased that you thought it was brilliant.

This wasn't meant to be a long piece, just a small little present for a good friend. A lot of the back story about the afterlife is presented in my other fics and I didn't want to rewrite those in this fic, does that make sense? I guess for those who have never read the other two fics, this might seem a little vague and kind of out there, but I think this glimpse into the afterlife suited this story.

I'm actually a James/Lily shipper and Snape/Lily is a pairing that I don't care much for. However, in this 'universe' that I created, I ship James/Sirius and Lily leaves James so that he can be with Sirius, and she ends up with Snape. So, it all kind of comes together in the end, but yeah, I can see where you're coming from.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for such a wonderful review.


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