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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your review!

I really enjoyed this :) Truthfully, I had to quickly google 'Caradoc Dearborn' after I read this story haha *runs away and hides under a rock* This is defiantly an unloved character and I love stories about them!

The pacing and flow was beautiful! You paced it just right and didn't make it too fast paced (which happens in a lot of stories)
I found this story very original, I've never read a story like this before and it was very believable. I love reading stories about the Marauder war (not sure if that's what it's called but I call it that anyway).

I loved your characterisation, it was absolutely perfect! Bellatrix was written brilliantly, you gave her just the right amount of Bellatrix-ness (haha)

Great story!

Author's Response: Hey!
Haha, thanks so much. I'm glad that you liked it :P

Yes, he's often forgotten about, so don't worry about having to Google him.

I'm really glad you thought the pacing and flow was good. Trying to write mystery is a step outside of my comfort zone, so i'm really happy that you thought it worked :)

Thanks so much for the review,
- Adele :)

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