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Review:AC_rules says:
I was really thrown when I started reading this and it wasn't in your beautiful second person but instead your beautiful first person. Then it all clicked into place and I did a mental cheer because the transition was so clever and well done and ah. I love the whole concept of this and now it's really hotting up.

Her confusion was just so perfect with the whole dream, the whole idea behind Rodolphus being dark and the other being light, and all the description in this was just as beautiful and clean and wonderful as ever.

I loved everything about this and, I swear it, next time I'll be up to date with this chapter and will review without being pushed by a review swap! Thanks for writing such a wonderful story - you really are very fabulous :D


Author's Response: Haha, sorry! I'm glad you liked it, though - I was really worried it would be too confusing/weird/etc. coz I've never read anything where that happens so it was a bit of a leap in the dark.

Ah, the dream... :P There's more confusion to come for poor Molly, but I'm glad you think it works well! The light/dark thing I really didn't do intentionally, but when I created Adonis I looked at him and was sort of like 'huh. They're like opposites'. Thanks! :D

Haha, don't worry about it! I'm still behind on reviewing Azkaban (I will review every chapter of it, even if it kills me!), so it's not that big a deal :D

Thank you for the wonderful review! (And you're welcome for the story!)
Aph xx

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