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Review:javct says:
javct45 here with your review!

First off, sorry about the wait. I was away on holiday without internet, but I'm home now and catching up on my reviewing :)

I adored this story, it was so heart-breaking yet amazing at the same time. I don't think I've ever read a (angst) Remus-centered story and I have to say this is a great way to be entered into his way of thinking (can i call it that?)

I think you paced it well, though one thing confused me. How old is Remus? Is this set in HBP? Just an idea you may want to put the year or something in it :)

I can't find any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes which made me want to do a happy dance!

Jas

Author's Response: Ha, no problem about the wait(:

And yeah, I wanted to do something I've never done before, I wanted to show how Remus handled everthing.

And Remus is during the 3rd book, when he was a teacher.

And yay, I hate grammer errors ):

~Sarah
Xxx


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