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Review:Aderyn says:
Gina. Why. How can you write so much and have it all be so nicceee???

Anyhow, this was definitely a bit surprise-y, though honestly, with this story I never know what to expect. I mean, I knew it wasn't going to be happily ever after. And I thought that maybe some QGA girls would just come by, screaming war chants, or something. But you know, that was just random guesses. So, I guess I'm a letle bit disappointed that Clemence didn't agree to help Albus, because it would be so epic if she did help. But I guess she's an ice queen and not used to this romance stuff and maybe feels a little scared or conflicted, cause even though she hates QGA they are her readers. And yeah. I could see why she gets mad. It's like her form of panicking, or something.

So, I just wish I could write this kind of snark/banter/sexual tension. It's like not totally realistic, but that's perfectly okay because for some reason it makes the whole story better and bigger and more fun. Those two think and talk so quickly, it's like how everyone wishes they could talk--you always have a snappy comeback ready and you always can one-up the other person and no one gets really mad that you do. I mean, I'm sure there are real people who do that, but I know I can't. Hopefully that's not too random and nonsensical.

Anyways, great job. And I know you've been updating like crazy, so no pressure, but I can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Eep, hii ♥

Ha, honestly, I don't know what to expect with this story either. This being my let's-have-fun story, every time I get bored with it, I just chuck something else in and try to make it work. Currently I'm grappling with how to integrate this etc-on-a-desert-land AU that has been plaguing my mind, and darn it, I will /do something with that/. cough. maybe. It involves Appy the Warrior Princess on a puma, so war chants is vaguely close. And thus why etc. is exactly that big epic snark fest of massively ridiculous proportions. I would not be able to take myself seriously if it weren't 8D

Ohoho, well it's a good things you'll find that prospect epic ;) because sometimes fate doesn't offer a choice in the matter. But definitely Clemence at the moment is not in the mood. All the turbulent angsty ice queen feelings! ...or lack thereof.

And ahaha, I know right! I'm just like, /they talk so fast/. I give it a bit of leeway like I would to television. And I do remember that I used to talk a bit like this when I was on my psychoanalyzing phase; it's actually quite easy as long as you make it -sound- like you're right. That's really all both of them are doing.

♥ thank you loff!

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