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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I hope you plan on coming back to this story at some point. You have such an interesting plot - definitely different from the normal Next Gens. I love your characterizations and your realistic portrayal of teenage life away from home, especially with a place like Hogwarts where magic can hide a lot of things. Plus, the way that rumors spread...poor Dom, but she doesn't really seem to be bothered by it (you actually wrote both at one point, and I think you meant bothered). I mean, I guess part of that not being bothered part comes from the fact that she seems very...I don't know, self-deprecating, almost?

I kind of hate stories where certain characters are portrayed as sleeping around and throwing rager parties, etc. but it works in this situation, with these characters and what Dom's going through.

I'm interested to see how her relationship grows with these group members. They're all so tired and I think they share a lot of fears and worries that I think can help each other. I like that Dom sort of recognizes them but isn't quite sure..and then she talks about how she is terrible with names, and we see that again in the flashback and her kissing boys whose names she can't remember.

One little thing is that in the beginning, Nurse Henderson introduces Dom, but then she says, "Hello" again, and I guess I was confused why she wouldn't say hello first.

Otherwise, I really enjoy this story. It's a bit darker than the normal Next Gen stories I read (they're usually romcom) but it's really intriguing. I really hope you consider continuing this. :(

Author's Response: I don't intend to abandon this completely - I do have hopes of coming back someday. :/ Dom is self-deprecating - I think that's a good way to describe it. She does her best not to be bothered by anything, though it doesn't always work.

I have to say that I'm not really a big fan of them either, which is awkward, because I wrote this? -hides- But now it's sort of become part of Dom's character so I'm kind of stuck with it.

The easiest answer to that is that I probably didn't notice it while writing and missed it while looking it over :D (such a great editing job)

Thank you for the review! ♥ I haven't thought about this story for a while, and I have a bit of a love/hate relationship with it... like I said, I don't want to give it up completely, but I'm not really satisfied with it at present. Maybe this summer I'll have the chance to rework and regroup... we'll see! Thank you for reviewing :)


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