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Review:Snapdragons says:

I read this a bit ago but I had too much trouble reviewing it so I sort of let it slide. But what is it with you and stories that make me choke up? Because this completely does and it sort of rips me apart and gah. :/

It was hard to read, but at the same time, I couldn't look away. Your writing is captivating and beautiful - without glorifying it, or making it sound good.

But I guess what really hit was how personal it felt, and that made it really powerful. It spoke personally to me, even though I've never been in that exact situation - but yeah, it was personal and gah it felt really true.

'Oh Lucy,' she says in that way of her, 'I know, I just wish you didn't have to try.' You wish that too. You wish that a lot.

But I really, truly love the ending - it's perfect. It's not over, but she's going to do her best. Good for Lucy. :)

This is sort of a bum review, but this might be one of your most powerful oneshots and it really speaks to how accomplished you are as an author. It was incredible.

Lots of hugs and love all around, yeah? ♥ ♥ ♥ HUGS!

Author's Response: Haannnah :)

That's okay, I can understand why you'd have trouble reviewing this, ahha. I think this is sort of one of those topics that are really uncomfortable to read about, but, yeah.

So you hit the nail on the head with the personal thing. This is the most personal I've ever gone with writing. -hides-

No, this was a really lovely review and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for leaving me such a lovely review to respond to AND LETS ALL HAVE BIGGG HUGGSS :D


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